aareet krsna

Slither

Posted in poetry by Aareet on June 9, 2008

“I’ll wear a mask for you”
And cover my every flaw,
Wear that heavy coat,
Stick stiffly to the law.

Comb my hair all right,
shave for every morn,
Man your every fight,
cheer for our newborn.

Help you cook then clean,
pay the monthly bills,
honeymoon by seas,
vacation in the hills.

Then merry-you in age,
healthy and carefree,
I’ll love you all my life,
If you’ll only let me be.

Aareet Krsna
2008-06-09

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  1. Aayushi said, on July 17, 2008 at 9:15 am

    really loved this one…gr8 incorporation and use of the line…and really sweet poem..completely enjoyed reading it..

  2. Aishwarya said, on July 31, 2008 at 12:52 am

    good one! i simply loved it!! great job!!

  3. chandu said, on August 19, 2008 at 9:57 pm

    doesnt say much of the guy in the first n second para…. does he hav to try soo much for his love to like him? but his love for her is sweet…

  4. poetswhoblog said, on December 15, 2008 at 2:35 pm

    Thank you for doing our prompt at PWB! This poem is so romantic. I really like it!

  5. Aareet said, on December 28, 2008 at 11:18 am

    Thanks for the opportunity pwb


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